My intentions for this draft was to explain to the readers how my experiences with different English can impact a person. In this draft I would like to focus on analyzing the quotes from different authors to support my points.
Your focus on your part of the essay is very clear. You did a great job with explaining your intentions. Lastly, make sure to talk about more than situation in your draft to give the audience different points of view.
Your focus on your part of the essay is very clear. You did a great job with explaining your intentions. Lastly, make sure to talk about more than situation in your draft to give the audience different points of view.
ReplyDeleteI think what you should do, In my opinion is that you should connect a quote from the article with a life story that happen to you in your past.
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